Suppossed carb rebuild

[DreamV4]

That's pretty judgmental...it's also grossly inaccurate!

Rewrite my sentence and I will replace it by yours. I changed it already, take a look.

 

[DreamV4]

That's pretty judgmental...it's also grossly inaccurate!

I changed it. Better? Waiting for your approval.

 

[dannymax]

It'll do.